The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/11
Very true... If we let a tire blowout prevent us from serving the Lord we have a lot more to fix than our car. Good job!
05/07/11
good story!! endings are always difficult but i think the last line or two could have been ommited and have the preacher scuttling to the bathroom and washing his hands
05/11/11
What's really good about this story is the humor. Your message is excellent, but the part about the popped tire, greasy forehead, and the people with the hand sanitizers at the end are the highlights.