The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice encouraging little piece. And I see the “something special” about the list too. :-)You’ve got me wondering now, which department store are you referring to? Would love to have read about one or two actual incidents exampling what was on the list.
This is a clever message. I'd enjoy to hear even more, maybe a story or two about the store. You had a fresh way to represent the topic.
Concise and well written. I think most readers would like to know the name of the store. Good wrap up.
05/03/11
A very thoughtful piece i like the list of outstanding qualities and it would have been good if you could have linked it more to the first paragraph.
Congratulations on ranking 12th in level 1!
05/12/11
This article reminded me of a teaching article that could be used as part of a small group for church. It provides soul searching criteria for one to ponder.
How do we figure out what to do and who to be? The first price tag actually came from a Christian clothier. Until than folks just kind of said what the price was and than negotiated. Ethics and rightness are imposede on us. Using appropirate scales is definitely scriptural. Interesting article. Made me think