The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/11
What a perfectly gorgeous picture of matrimony! Both as an earthly event and a heavenly one that portrays us as the Bride of Christ. It caused me to sigh with delight! And I love the creative style of rhyming you used.

A+ on this one!
This is outstanding. I really enjoyed that for the most part it could be a description of my own wedding and of the relationship with Jesus. I think many readers will be able to totally relate to this lovely poem on different levels. Keep writing these beautiful pieces. I have a feeling no matter what your genre is you will be able to relate to your readers. Spread your wings and soar.
In addition to agreeing with comments made, I think you did an excellent job with both word choice and metre.
05/05/11
Beautiful! Congratuations on your win this week! :)
05/05/11
well done and topical!