The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/11
What a marvelous, wonderfully godly example is Mr. Baxter! This story touches the heart and spurs the Christ-follower on to greater heights of truly caring for others. LOVE IT!
This is a lovely tribute to all the forgotten and faithful saints in our midst. You did a great job of acquainting us with Mr. Baxter and I could see him smiling and getting "in the way".
04/29/11
I have feople want prayer more than most anything else. It's a gift we give to one another. Mr. Baxter, a servant, laying down his life for another. Good lesson. Good story. I liked this a lot!
great story --- held my attention to the end (I wanted to see what drove this guy!) --- very poignant
This is a great story with a wonderful message you really drew me in. The bit of red ink I noticed would be you wrote enquire instead of inquire, but your delightful way of talking about a man who is truly outstanding more than made up for any little typo.
Congratulations on ranking 7th in level 1!