The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/11
Oh! That's sweet! I can see george out standing in his field...all through life! Good man, good testimony.
05/03/11
This is a great tribute to your wonderful husband. It's full of good stories, but they were so short. I hope you'll be able to write each story separately so you can do them justice.
05/03/11
George seems like a great guy who works hard at everything.

You did a good job of telling the story, but if you had shown me rather than tell I think you'd have a great story.

Also remember to divide your story into more paragraphs and double space them.

You really have the gift of storytelling and I could tell your story is important to you. Keep writing, I think you have many good stories in you.