The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/11
"What would it take to become excellent."

I would pick this as a winner! Compelling.

We need someone leading us into excellence, and you gave us the answer.

Thank you!
My feet are sticking to the floor with you. And my heart is with you in finding the only true excellence in Jesus. Nicely written piece.
You made some great points that many people will be able to relate to.

Before I got sick, my house was quite clean, I worked at least 60 hours a week. After I became ill my energy level dropped to almost zero.Finally after many struggles and several hospitalizations, I learned the hard way what was important.

I needed to be the best mother I could, the housework would still be there but my kids would grow up. Everyone needs to listen to Jesus for what he plans for their life. Your article is a great reminder to the many people who have too much on their plates. Outstanding job.
Congratulations on ranking 10th in level 1!