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04/29/11
You pulled me into the pain and then triumph! Good work here and a lesson in "never give up!"
05/03/11
Nice story of love and victory. Jesus' love and sacrifice are outstanding. One small suggestion - what do you think about using your fourth sentence as the opening? It's so powerful, it drew me in.
You did an outstanding job of tackling a difficult topic. I have been in the same place as the MC. It's a dark and scary place until we let the light come in. Nice job.
Beautiful testimony. I hope you get a chance to expand it and share it with more and more people.
05/05/11
Well written! A testimony of God's amazing grave. I too have had an encounter with Jesus that changed my life!
Congratulations on ranking 9th in level 1!