The Official Writing Challenge
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I can feel Jesus watching over me through your writing. I'm a newbie, so I'm not the greatest critque writer, but I know what I like. I liked this!
I enjoyed your story of the watchful shepherd. Your description of the newborn lambs makes a good picture. I like the thought that our Lord is watching over us like that.
Beautifully done. I felt like I was right there, involved in this rural scene. Loved how you wove spiritual truths into the story.
Devotional thoughts worthy of thoughtful consideration. Well done.
This is a beautiful piece. You have created the scene so well and the parallels to The Good Shepherd bring deeper understanding. Great devotional piece. Thank you for sharing!
This a wonderful devotional. It makes you feel as if you're there, watching it all happen.
What a wonderful devotional, beautifully expressed in words. It brings a certain peace while reading and as the afterthoughts linger. Easy to see why this placed so highly. Congratulations - well deserved indeed.
thanks for the story and congrats on your placing. :-) beautifully told
Congratulations on your well written piece! I, like others, will carry this one with me.
This is really beautiful. I felt like I was right there on a green hill on a beautiful spring day.Congratulations on a well-deserved ribbon.
What a lovely look at farm life and great devotional too! I enjoyed this. Congrats on your placement!
A beautiful piece. I could picture the scene and connect with the emotions here. Congrats.