The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/11
It sounds to me like you are an outstanding daddy of an outstanding kid. Good job!
Okay, you got me catching my breath and holding back tears. What a dad! And you write well too!
05/03/11
A great story and well written, with just a few corrections needed. Loved the title and the ending. Your dialogue was authentic and flowed well.

Three cheers for Zeek and Daddy too.
05/03/11
Loved this story. Reminds me of my son's first days of baseball now that we're at his last days.
05/03/11
Ah... love this little guy's story. I hope this is true. :) It's perfect for the topic. I could see it all!
05/04/11
Loved this story! I could just see little Zeke. He reminded me of my nephews and watching them play tee ball.
05/04/11
My grandma heart loved every word! Kudos to Dad AND Zeek! Memories built for a lifetime! This is a winner in MY book.
05/04/11
Well-written and an enjoyable read! I like the characterization, the pace and the plot. You have successfully captured your readers' interest from the start to the end. Excellent work.