The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/11
Lovely. The poem is simple, yet powerful, and I love the background you gave on it.

Why some lose their faith in tiny trials and some hold on to Jesus through life's toughest storms is a paradox that is close to my heart. I too, want to be one with faith that stands strong through anything.

Well done.
I needed this very good reminder of God’s presence even when I can’t see the safety net he has spread beneath me. A tiny bit of “red ink”, and it could be it’s not really “red ink” but rather my personal preference, which is that the scripture reference be put in a footnote instead of in parenthesis as that sort of interrupts the flow for me. Other than that, good job and thank you for sharing it with us.
05/04/11
I know of at least two songs that contain those beautiful and inspiring words. Your writing is a wonderful reminder in the midst of all this world's chaos.