The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the humor and the friendly personal feel to this story.
04/22/11
lovely :-) it is great when you can see the funny side of these disasters. I love the Granny Annie dance and i can just picture it.
This was a delight to read. The Granny Annie dance made me laugh out loud. Youhave a great sense of humor. Try breaking the paragraphs unto smaller ones for a short story. You told two different events and I think each one could stand on its own with a few more details. You did a nice job of showing me the scene on the porch. Great job.
04/27/11
You had me at cupcakes:) This was a sweet tale, I like the paragraph about stepping out and sharing Jesus by an act of kindness. If we are willing to put ourselves out there, God will be with us and open hearts. Thank you for the fun read!
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level one!