The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/11
We reap what we sow. We have to be careful of how we treat others because, in the end,it will come back around to get us.

I liked this story. I instantly felt anger at the narrator. By the story's end, I applauded his subtle change of heart. Sometimes GOD uses extreme measures to get our attention.
You did a great job with this. I could feel the suspense building. I wish you had done a tad more showing than telling but then the twist at the end made it all worth it. Great message with a nice dash of humor.
04/26/11
there but for the grace of God..... a good way to tell the story and to show the danger of being judgemental :-)