The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a nice devotion. I liked how you used personal stories to make your point.

I think you could expand each story a bit and have three nice devotions. Sometimes that is hard to do because in your mind you linked the events together.

I used to do that and was told to give more details to each individual piece and I found that I could make them better by separating.

You have a great knack for writing and drawing the reader in. When the reader wants to know more, you know you're on the right track.:)
04/26/11
great devotional. you write with great feeling and it is very apt to use personal experiences to illustrate spiritual truth. i also agree with the other persons comments that going in more depth to one scenario might be another way of tackling this....but the variety of illustrations from different parts of daily life is also good :-).