The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet story. I loved all of the questions the kids came up with. I also liked how Mia answered one of the questions. Something adults often do when writing stories for kids is have the adult in the story come up with the answers or be a hero. It's great for kids to see story children resolving the conflict. Nice job.
04/26/11
You used dialogue well to communicate the message. I felt like I was sitting in the youth group while they talked.