The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/05
Preach it, brother!! This was so very good, I was carried along like I was actually listening from the congregation. Great message!
10/17/05
good story with a message that needs to me heard within the words
10/17/05
good ideas and preaching here. Would have liked to have seen bits about Maggie earlier in the story and a little more about her problem. You left me curious and will have to tell me more next time! :)
10/19/05
Great way you portrayed the preacher! I too would have liked to know more about the woman.
The preacher takes centre stage, and you capture his full throttle sermon well; threading some of Maggies reactions to the sermon in places would have given us more about her - but there is much atmosphere in this. I can here the gospel choir now! God bless.
10/21/05
I had read this article before and accidently this time. It is a lot of power in your presentation. How,d I miss it before
10/24/05
Katherine, I was a judge this week, and I have to tell you that I LOVED this story. Your writing is skillful; I could hear every word as if spoken aloud, and I felt as if I were in the congregation, waving my white handkerchief and saying "Oh, bless Jesus." This is truly inspired writing!