The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/11
interesting! so who was the old man and what was he doing in the school?perhaps that was exactly the mystery you wanted us to puzzle.! thank you i am suitably curious.
04/26/11
I felt Ariel's desperation and I'm glad God answered her prayers. But the story felt unfinished. What happens next?