The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/11
i like this simple clear message in this story and woven around the soggy wet pamphlet. thank you for crafting it.
04/25/11
I like the way you wove together the narrator's story and that of the person who dropped the pamphlet. Your gradual revealation of the narrator's story was well done, but your movement from past to present tense was a little jarring.
I like this. The tension from wondering what the pamphlet said evolved into a tension of the narrator’s story as you gradually built our interest in the MC. Well written.