The Official Writing Challenge
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Though the fear and panic are quite clear, it was told softly andI could feel the love and desperate need for the baby-ho get better.
04/14/11
The first paragraph made me think this was historical, and the realization that this was a possible near-future was an eye-opener. The despair and hope both come through strongly in your writing. A captivating slice-of-life story.
04/17/11
A beautiful painting...my eyes devoured your artful words!
Well written--you kept my interest throughout.