The Official Writing Challenge
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What a nice outbreak of love!
I suggest you include a little more of the struggle, so the reader can enjoy the joy of the outcome better.
Keep writing!
What a lovely story and like a yawn a smile is a very contagious action! I enjoyed your creative names as well.
I love your story and your style. It's just a little whimsical, but sends a great message without preaching.
Congratulations for placing 8th in level one!