The Official Writing Challenge
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Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Control is also an issue in my life. "Do not be anxious about anything, but in everything with prayer and supplication present yourself to God." (I forgot the end of the verse)

Thank you for an excellent reminder.

I thought this was pretty cleverly written. I love that moment when I realized the deeper meaning here. Very good exposition.
Having suffered major panic attacks for a good part of my life my heart really ached for the MC.

You did a great job telling me about the panic attack, but I'd leave to see it in my mind like I'm watching the MC on TV. Also try not to use the topic word too much.

You did such a good job of creating empathy in me for the MC I'm sure many people can relate to this horrible feeling. Many mistake it for a heart attack- Nicely done.
Congratulations for placing 6th in level one!