The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very educational, thanks for sharing. Its always good to be cautious when hiking through the forest!
I like how a scripture principle gave you the impetus to follow up on something you were skeptical about. This is a very informative and well written article. I would love to see a re-write of it put into a dramatic story form (i.e., a show rather than tell exercise.)
This was an interesting essay on ticks and Lyme disease. It's also partly a great devotion.

You really didn't need the first two paragraphs ifyou were going to tell a story or devotion. I think if you had stuck with one genre (essay) or another (story/devotion) you'd have a really powerful piece.

I like the bit of humor, challenging the PA at least once home and the scriptures you quoted. I think storytelling or devotions is your natural genre. Keep writing and trying new things Again good job.
Congratulations for placing 13th in level one!