The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this story, the wisdom from one so young and Tony listening. Her telling of the Bible story was a great interpretation. It flowed very nicely.
Such wisdom out of the mouths of babes. Good lesson.
This is a charming story with a great, you did a great job with this one.
You have an excellent message wrapped up in an interesting story. I love the ending.
Compelling story! Liked reading it...a lot!
An editor can nit-pick (lose the exclamatory points); but this is a delightful story. Keep up the good work.