The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/11
Anyone who has had teenagers can certainly relate with the emotion-filled conversation that you so beautifully conveyed in this piece. Well done, thanks for sharing your work!
As A mother of two words who have worked at summer camp I know how awful it would have been for an outbreak of food poisoning. Your ending was a tad sudden, you had some great opportunities to make the reader laugh. Don't be afraid to be funny. Nice job!