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A good retelling from a personal viewpoint. I wonder at the balance of telling and showing but it kept me interested.
04/14/11
I think it very well may have been like this. Too bad that on Friday they changed their tune.
04/14/11
Good story, and the slow reveal of the familiar story you're connecting Haddad's brief scene with is very nicely done.
04/14/11
In the context of what is happening in North Africa and on the Arabian peninsula, this retelling of an old story is refreshingly current. The ability to hook familiar stories to "outbreaking" events is powerful Good job.
04/18/11
I liked this action, a narrative deserving a view. How many saw these events and their thoughts never recorded. If you are interested send me a P.M.. I am working on such a story.
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