The Official Writing Challenge
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The story held me and kept me reading to the conclusion. Keep writing. It might help for clarity to read it aloud even if only to yourself. Good job, though.
04/14/11
This is very good and very believable. Hopefully someone will read this and be encouraged to repent and turn to God.
04/20/11
You told a story of pain and suffering with great emotion. I found the transitions a little confusing, but the hope and love were wonderful.
Congratulations for placing 12th in level one!
I really enjoyed this. I had been at a dark place in my life and told a friend I had proof there was no God. When he asked me why I said because God says he will never give you more than you can handle and this is too much therefore there is no God. He quietly answered the only thing that proves is God has more faith in you than you have in yourself. For over 27 years now, I've remembered those words and they have helped me through many times when I know I wouldn't have survived without Jesus's help. Your story will reach out and touch many.