The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked how you did this. If your changed the adults to children It could be a perfect? storybook to explain eternity to kids. You could leave the dream sequence out too because kids can see things we can't. I also have a special ornament from my mom that I keep out all year. It's a Santa kneeling by Baby Jesus. Great story.
03/18/11
Creative and entertaining piece of writing.
Congratulations for placing 8th in your level!