The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/11
I don't know if this is a true story or not, but it sure sounds like one. Great descriptions of what it feels to be trapped under water and finally surface.

Wonderfully written.
03/20/11
You kept a steady and progressive "stream" of suspense here. I also enjoyed the "flow" of thoughts generating during the crisis. Your topic was fresh and very interesting.
Nice job.
Wow this was so full of suspense! I felt my heart thudding the fact that it was written in first person so I knew the MC would live, but my heart was still thumping.Great job of writing.
03/24/11
well done!