The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/11
I especially liked the opening of the story. The shepherds played an important role during the birth of Jesus.
03/20/11
It was refreshing to read an episode reguarding the "beginning"of Christ's redemptive plan rather than the latter. You were successful as well making this a "now" story, adding humor within the script. I am impressed with the boldness to write it that way, it was believable. Well done.
03/21/11
good one :-) and it is good to hear the shepherds and the angels at other times than just christmas. the story is eternal
This is nicely done. I could imagine what it must have felt like to be a shepherd. I am not well-versed with the Old Testament but I have several Jewish friends and they don't believe in Hell. This could just be an individual decision though. You did a great job pulling me in and kept me to the end.