The Official Writing Challenge
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I especially liked the opening of the story. The shepherds played an important role during the birth of Jesus.
It was refreshing to read an episode reguarding the "beginning"of Christ's redemptive plan rather than the latter. You were successful as well making this a "now" story, adding humor within the script. I am impressed with the boldness to write it that way, it was believable. Well done.
good one :-) and it is good to hear the shepherds and the angels at other times than just christmas. the story is eternal
This is nicely done. I could imagine what it must have felt like to be a shepherd. I am not well-versed with the Old Testament but I have several Jewish friends and they don't believe in Hell. This could just be an individual decision though. You did a great job pulling me in and kept me to the end.