The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/11
Your piece is very moving and beautifully executed. It made me wish I had met your momma. Keep writing. You have the gift.
03/18/11
Beautiful and moving writing. Thank you for letting us see into your momma's eyes.
03/21/11
lovely so warm and tender and generous writing. you paint a tender and beautiful picture. title is perfect!
03/21/11
The first 2 sentences made me feel like I knew Momma personally It was an excellent opener.Normally, I might comment about going from present to past to present isn't the best thing to do;but you made it feel just right. That takes a lot of skill, keep writing you have a great deal of natural talent.
03/21/11
The first 2 sentences made me feel like I knew Momma personally It was an excellent opener.Normally, I might comment about going from present to past to present isn't the best thing to do;but you made it feel just right. That takes a lot of skill, keep writing you have a great deal of natural talent.
03/24/11
Congratulations for placing 13th in your level!