Home Read What's New Join
My Account Login

Read Our Devotional             2016 Opportunities to be Published             Detailed Navigation

The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge



how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level


submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners

Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.



how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Eternity (03/10/11)

TITLE: Eternal Moments
By Lisa Kurasz


It seems an odd thing to say, but my life is filled with eternal moments. I know experts would probably describe eternity differently, but for me it has consisted of those places in my memory when the clock hands did not correctly tell the true passing of time.

When I was younger, no correct measurement of time could be taken when I was faced with the fear of a gun pointed at me and the desire to flee. Or who could count the moments that passed as I waited to give birth to my precious son when his little heart was slowing down to a dangerous rate, or of the numbing fear that gripped me as I followed the grim faced nurse from the waiting room way too soon for my daughter to have been out of surgery. And the terrifying stoppage of time when discovering my little girl was missing from the tent, and the surreal feeling of it all. Or how reality blurred when finding a note that said my son was hurt and in the emergency room, and how time seemed to take forever from then to the moment I saw his banged and bruised body.

But the eternal moments in my life are not all frightening. Some are full of joy. Such as listening to my daughter, when she was seven, sing her first special for the church, which was a song that most adults would not tackle. Also, the first time another daughter, who has so many learning difficulties, read without any assistance. And that precious moment when I saw my son for the first time, after he returned home from war. My life is filled with these eternal moments which are forever marked in my heart.

Then there was the long drive to Florida, when stopping to stretch my legs in Valdosta, Georgia, I ultimately walked into a small book store, and for reasons I could not explain, I found myself faced with a pressing urgency to purchase the Bible that was on the table. This led me to the greatest moment of my life when I finally realized that I was a sinner and there was nothing more precious than being the Lords. It put everything in perspective for me, and even now, when things are hard or rough, I remember that any particular circumstance is but for a moment when weighed against the eternity I will have with my God.

True understanding of eternity comes from the moments that are faced in life, and not by the hands of a clock.

The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE

JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel.

This article has been read 368 times
Member Comments
Member Date
Sarah Elisabeth 03/18/11
This was really good! Loved how you started and ended with the hands of a clock image.

Each of these experiences are well worth exploring in detail. I would have loved for you to 'show' me a little more about your long trip to Florida and how that led to your Salvation.

Great stuff here, and good take on the topic. Write on!
Virgil Youngblood 03/18/11
Some memories, as you have so clearly shown, are timeless. Thank you for sharing yours. Well done.
Bonnie Bowden 03/18/11
Very good writing. I believe eternal moments really do exist.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 03/18/11
You make some great points and talk about several events that does feel like it could go on forever. I almost wish you had taken just one of those moments and expand on it. I can't imagine what it would feel like to have a gun pointed at me, Youhave some some great stories that you could could expand on Keep up the writing and thanks for the great message
diana kay03/21/11
i love it! you have captured some special moments in your little snapshots. I like the way you group them.
diana kay03/24/11
well done lisa!! and well deserved in the HC slot!