The Official Writing Challenge
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Captivating story. You've captured the essence of Time and Eternity perfectly. Definitely my favorite read so far. I hope this story is recognized in some way.
Fun - yet with an element of depth at the same time. I love the long flowing glittery hair of Eternity and the tired shrivelled little creature of Time. Beautiful descriptions. Excellent writing.
clever story. I like it even though this type of allegory/fantasy is not usually on my personal preference list list, this is a good and entrancing one and a very clever take on the eternity/time theme
What a brilliant and imaginative way to portray Eternity and Time. This is a fresh,original take on the topic and an out of the box seems like a winner to me.
well done on a well deserved first place!
So happy that you won 1st place in beginner and also were an EC Challenge winner.

Your writing was superb!
Oh wow! This was very, very good. So creative. Congratulations!
What a beautiful story! It was so hopeful and light hearted and refreshing. You imagery was beautiful and your promise of The New King left me my heart so happy! What a great way to start my day! Thank you!
Wow, this is just so good. An excellent dialogue between Time and Eternity, 'both made by The Perfect One'. Just excellent writing and well deserving of first place. Congratulations and thank you for such a wonderful story. (Just one thing, is 'fury friends' meant to be 'furry friends'? - I guess so.)
Lu-Yee ... you won!!!! First prize in your level and eighth overall ... out of over 100 entries!!!!! Not a surprise, but very exciting just the same. I'd like to world to know, please, that I'm Lu-Yee's friend and read her writing ALL the time ... but sadly, mostly just work emails. Hope to read much more interesting stuff in the future with your writing adventures (not just emails), Lu-Yee.
Because of your creativity, your MC's came alive to your readers. I love how you portrayed Eternity and Time, and then wove the birth of Jesus into the scene so effortlessly. Beautiful and well deserved wins. I feel this quality of writing is way beyond level one. I'm clapping for you on both wins.
That was an aw-some story. Well written like a master craftsman. The essence of the story would provoke one to think about his or her preparation for life's future. I'm new to Faith Writers and like the site.