The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/11
Very well rhymed poem. I especially liked the last stanza.
03/18/11
great poem and i like the title.... the poem "does what it says on the tin!"
I enjoyed reading this poem. I think you meant to write "destinations that monopolize our days." You wrote "destenations that monopolizes...
Other than that one typo or grammatical error, your piece was very convicting and well written. A good reminder to "give to God what is God's."
This is a wonderful reminder of what is important. Your rhyme and rhythm just flowed almost effortlessly