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Lovely story that rang so true. I find I say the same thing to my kids far too often. I love that the MC truly did take only a minute at the end. Nice job.
03/11/11
This story had a lot of truth to it. I am glad his daughter got the needed time at the end.
How true your story is! You did a great job showing Bobby's pain and and relating to the average parent. Nicely done.
03/14/11
great story, you hit the nail (or he minute) on the head!
03/14/11
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Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
03/16/11
A very good article on the subject at hand, and oh my, I believe all parents are guilty! Good job of expressing the theme.
03/17/11
well done for highly commended and it is great you will have the judges feedback as well