The Official Writing Challenge
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03/11/11
A well written story with ending Bible text that brought the story together.
03/11/11
A really well crafted story with a lot of twists and turns. The last verse draws to an excellent conclusion.
03/13/11
gosh! a very dramatic story and you kept the pace and tension well throughout. I think it is also an appropriate one for eternity particularly with the last line.....
03/13/11
gosh! a very dramatic story and you kept the pace and tension well throughout. I think it is also an appropriate one for eternity particularly with the last line.....
03/15/11
Your voice is strong and your details well chosen. There were a few tense mix-ups where we went from present to past and back again, but your story is excellent.
You did a nice job with this one. I compliment your decision to go with the ending you did instead of making it a dream. It's perfect introduction for the coming topic too. Nicely done.