The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/11
Excellent writing. This is such a tough position to be in. I do know someone in the same circumstances, who chose to raise the baby and love it. I liked the image of the dew on the leaf.
03/11/11
well written, atmospheric and emotive, good job!
03/11/11
Very powerful and well written. You could almost feel what the MC was feeling. Nice job.
03/14/11
I liked this very much. It made a tear come to my eye, also. I wish more women felt this way.
03/16/11
I loved the reference to the leaf and the dew also. A real interest grabber and a great job of writing it.
Congratulations for placing 9th in level 1!