The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/11
Beautifully written. I am sure this scenario is far more common than we know.
03/11/11
A very moving story, full of hope, grace, and truth. Thank you for this.
03/13/11
great story you have painted a very lively and clear picture of your MC life.... and death. thank you for compiling this. I dont know if perhaps it would of
worked better to have built up to the ending rather than starting with the shooting.... just an idea.
I enjoyed this. It’s well written and has a good flow and pace to it. I appreciated the description of the city and the kites. The story feels both real and powerful. Well done!
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 1!