The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/11
Well written historical story. It was exciting from start to finish. However, if you double space between paragraphs, it will be easier to read.
03/11/11
Very exciting story to read. Next time remember that proper spacing helps the reader ejoy what you have written.
03/13/11
i loved this! it was so different ! i loved the historical setting and the way the story unfolded, you wove the minutes theme well into the tapestry of the story!