The Official Writing Challenge
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This is cute!

I had some problems following the story line, but that may just be me. I did get the general gist of the story, however. :)

Loved the ending. I was wondering when the theme would come in, and you made it work.
some lovely lovely descriptions and dialogue here. I too got a little lost in the story even though read it twice and carefully. I could not quite understand who was the alcoholic and why Emma did not go to the ranch. the mysteries made me all the more curious.
This is an interesting analogy. It's so important to put work into a marriage. It does take a lot of time to make it work.
Very clever story. There were a few grammatical errors, that if fixed, would make it even better.
This was a clever entry that held my interest throughout. Nicely done...Spot on with the topic. God Bless~