The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/11
Very well written!
03/03/11
This entry is this week's randomly chosen winner for our new little prize--a free ratings feedback report. The author will be contacted today via the Private Messenger service with more information.

Congratulations. :-)

Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Tradegies like this remind us how fragile life is and how it can change in just a blink of an eye. But it also shows the compassion and love that we, humans, our capable of.
03/05/11
This was well-written. I felt as if I was experiencing this heart-rending time.
03/05/11
very topical and yes the destruction takes a moment and the rebuilding years and years. I am pleased you have the review prize i am sure you will get much better feedback for that than i could hope to provide.
03/10/11
Very well written. Distruction comes so quickly. I really liked your line about time being consumed.

Congratulations on your 3rd place award.