The Official Writing Challenge
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That's a great message!
Yes, taking every thought captive is a choice, halting negativity from "frittering" {I like your word} away precious time. The mind is part of the equation in our daily tasks. Good job.
great reflections and lots of lovely nuggets of truth here. I think if you divided into paragraphs with spacings (see some of the other reflective articles here) it would be easier to read and make the piece seem more naturally paced.having said that the contents are very good
You had a very strong message. I think I would have had an easier time reading, if you had added some kind of spacing between paragraphs.
Thanks for the feedback. This is exactly why I needed a place like Faith Writers!