The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/11
Wonderful, thought provoking entry. Thank you for sharing.
03/04/11
Well written poem. Good rhyme.
03/05/11
A great job of beautiful rhyming poetry. Our God is an Awesome God!
03/05/11
lovely reflective poem.I liked the "broke a piece off eternity and called it time"
i think that in the first verse it should be 'dwelt' not 'dwelled' and i think it should be 'not cost a dime' rather than

'not cost dime' i love to read your poem thank you.
03/09/11
I loved your sharing of how great God is. Thank you for writing!
03/09/11
What a beautiful expression of Gods love for s!
03/09/11
Thanks for the help Diana