The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/05
Well written, a little dialogue help and this goes a long way. I enjoyed the story.
10/11/05
I too liked the dialogue which made the story more interesting. The gesture at the end of the story provided a beautiful touch of love and understanding. Well done.
10/12/05
Nicely done, and very sweet. One thing: "fiancee" with two "e's" is a woman, "finace" with one "e" is a man. Lovely story.
10/12/05
Well good grief, I spelled it wrong. FIANCE. With the cute little accent mark. One "e" for a man. Sorry!