The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/11
This is a very detailed and intense piece of writing. Very descriptive.
02/27/11
Your use of the verse between paragraphs is so very good. You have a good message!
This is really deep and intense, I'm not sure if I understood it all, lout I could feel your parson burning the words onto the computer screen,
02/28/11
A very dramatic and intense piece. I liked the transitional words between paragraphs.
03/03/11
well done on the highly commended spot :-)