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02/24/11
What a wonderful story of God's provision. And the "pickles" in life are always there-during every generation! The will to fight through our troubles as we cling to God is a wonderful lesson.
02/26/11
I loved how God's provisions were witnessed by each generation. I liked how the MC was going to continue in the same spirit as her mother and grandmother.
02/26/11
A beautiful story and so well written.
This is such a beautiful and caring idea It gave me chills to know how the first grandmother could book into the future look into the future and give her progeny the greatest gift-hope. Well done.
03/01/11
great story and definately on theme in many many ways :-)
03/01/11
Well written with the inter-weaving of the generations. A nostalgic and heart-felt story that held my attention.
This is a fine story. It flowed nicely and held my interest throughout. I especially enjoyed the ending; that can-do frame of mind just isn’t emphasized as much anymore. Thank you.
03/02/11
Ooooh, what a NEAT story! I loved the twist at the end. I did not see that coming at all and it made it such a wonderful read! I loved the details you had in between of each women and their lives and how it all came together in the end. Very nicely done!
I loved this hearwarming story. Really great writing!