The Official Writing Challenge
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02/25/11
What a wonderfully scripted story. I felt like I was right there alongside the girl and the mother.

Well done.
02/27/11
Beautiful, poetic language, and such a sense of place. A lovely piece.
03/01/11
i love this :-) i would have liked the little girl to have a name rather than just be generic... she was special enough!
03/03/11
This is a sweet tale between mother and daughter. Congratulations on ranking 6th in level 1!
03/03/11
This is a sweet tale between mother and daughter. Congratulations on ranking 6th in level 1!