The Official Writing Challenge
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You've filled this with raw emotion and have given me a lot to think about.
I really like this, the passion and content in it is something I relate to!

May I add my two cents worth? I believe that God wants us to call on him to rain down his power on us, because it's only in his strength that we can even hope to resist the devil. James 4:7-10 is a wonderful scripture that supports that!

Sorry if I'm being 'preachy,' it's only because I identify with your piece so much and want to encourage you!
This is a strong piece with a great message. We each inherited our sinful natures but with God's help, we can overcome it. Good job.
I agree with the scripture reference Helen listed in her comment.