The Official Writing Challenge
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02/25/11
God's handiwork is everywhere. The tour sounded like it really was a tour of your lifetime.
02/26/11
great story... would like you to have concentrated on one of the "discoveries" on the tour in more detail as it seemed to have a bit too much in it.
i was particularly interested in the convicts and their place in the history making and construction projects