The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/11
Wonderful read! Loved the Bible verses used and the way you talked of God's heart.
02/25/11
lovely :-) i like the scripture reference to "eternity in our hearts"
02/25/11
I really liked this. It really spoke to my heart.
Beautiful your words just flow effortlessly.
02/28/11

Wonderful!

There's nothing to critique. You did a fabulous job with weaving in the theme of "centuries" in a poem full of imagery.
Congratulations on ranking 10th in level 1!