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May God bless those who serve to protect us. Would have loved to hear more and to know "the rest of the story." Unclear how well this fits in with the topic, but you held my attention throughout. Thanks for sharing.
awww it is such a pity that the chaplain had no means of checking that all was truly ok. I could see the connection with the theme. The weeks of seperation and the weeks of no connection between the wife and her soldier husband.
i think the story needed a bit more of a "ending" on way or another as it felt incomplete
It must be devestating fighting a war in Iraq, and not nowing what is happening to family members at home. I think prayer is a good beginning, but sometimes actually knowing that nothing is wrong is even better.