The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/11
Enjoyed this interesting story. Happy for you that it turned out so well. Thank you for sharing.
02/19/11
it is great to read a Good News story of an relationship started over the internet :-). At first the reader (i.e me) did not know if it was going to turn out as triumph or disaster.
it is a good telling, maybe you could try adding a little dialogue into your stories now?
P.S it is great to have another British person on this site :-)
What a delightful love story. It's amazing how God knars and needs and answers our prayers with love. Nice job with descriptions and pulling me into the story
Adored this gentle love story with God in the center!
02/20/11
Oh, this is lovely! I can relate to this, as God brought my hubby and I together via the internet!
02/20/11
Good love story, first person writing is hard. Good Job.
02/22/11
I am happy your romance over the Internet worked for you. After reading Terri Blackstock's book Predator, I am very hesitant to make any kind of friend on the Internet.
Congratulations for placing 14th in level one.